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Tagebuch by KGBigelow

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Artistic nitpick: I realize this picture is almost 2 years old, but you asked for feedback.

Something bothers me about the Heavy's eye region. Not only do his cartoonishly round eyes look odd compared to the other two characters' eyes (I realize this is supposed to show surprise but it doesn't IMO fit the more realistic art style), his eyebrows are black (and thus prominent) and very close together over the root of the nose, and his forehead looks extremely low here.
Looking at the actual character model, his eyebrows are more arched, brown rather than black, and space much wider apart. His forehead isn't that low, either.

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Other than that, I love the expressions of the characters here, and the colours.
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